Based on the feedback I received on essay three i plan to focus more on run on sentences. In this essay run ons have seem to have been the source of a great deal of errors. There was also some comments on careless mistakes that would have been caught if i would have taken the time to carefully read through my essay. There were a few sentence structure errors; i need to pay closer attention when i am structuring my sentences. If i refrain from using the word “and” as a sentence starter, it would most likely eliminate this problem. My plan for the final draft is to really take my time when writing it. I will complete a paragraph a day. This will give me the opportunity to really focus on each word in the paper. with this technique, when I am rereading my work i am not skipping over careless mistake. The smaller the section the easier it is to catch the mistakes. Also have found that working in the library and cyber loft in the web center helps me stay focus on the task at hand less distractions. Overall I feel that this essay shows a vast improvement from past essays. There was still some errors, and places in need of improvement. But the practice is starting to reflect in my work.